Wednesday, May 30, 2012

"We can be heroes ... just for one day."

Who's your hero?

Is it your father?  Your mother?  Is it a guy you knew in school who could have had a promising career in sports, science or the arts and instead, he enlisted in the military?  Is it someone who did something that made this world a better place, if only for a few minutes?  Is it someone who wrote or said a line that makes the midnight in your soul pass just that much quicker?  Do you even know them personally?

When you create a character, whether it's for the printed page or the stage, what positive qualities would that hero possess?  What do you find admirable?  Determination?  Loyalty?  Kindness towards the disadvantaged?

Now let's add some other qualities.  What qualities do you not find attractive?  Chronic lying?  Co-dependence?  Self-destructive tendencies?  Shy around women?  Claustrophobic?  Isn't a hero without flaws kinda dull?

Indiana Jones is courageous and curious, yet his devotion to preserving antiquities prevented him from dispatching his greatest enemy.

The first Doctor (from Doctor Who) once endangered his granddaughter and her teachers simply because he was curious.  In fact, he disabled his TARDIS to ensure they stayed around long enough for him to investigate the era they'd landed in.

Clark Kent might get more accomplished if he didn't feel the overwhelming need to preserve the secret of his dual identity.

Building a character might often be as easy as -- to quote the old saying -- picking from Column A, then something from Column B.

Make two lists of personality traits.  One column should be all positive traits (courageous, polite, benevolent, heroic, etc.) and the other with personality flaws.  Close your eyes and let your finger fall on one column, then the other, and see what you come up with.

Then construct a history for the character.  How did they become the person you made?  What events reinforced their positive values?  Their limitations?  You can hit the high notes without having to scribble out the entire symphony, but work out enough to justify the hero's traits.  After all, most people know what happened to Bruce Wayne when he and his parents exited The Mark of Zorro.  On the other hand, knowing what position Bruce played on the Bill Finger High School sophomore basketball team might not be that vital or all that interesting.

So far, I've kept the protagonist as a male in the current day in America.  Now change the era, the gender, and the setting.  How did a man with firm religious convictions and a fear of the number six become that way before he began exploring the Antares System?  Emily's curiosity suited her desire to become a nurse, but could she overcome her shyness while living in the District of Columbia during the final days of the War of 1812?

Now do the same thing for your villain.  Here's where you can have some real fun!  Make two lists of positive traits.  Work up two lists of character flaws.  Create a list with a positive and a negative column.  Change the gender.  Change the time period.  Change the setting.

Then give your protagonist a goal.  Provide a motivation for your villain to not allow him/her to succeed.  Now you have a story!

How do you create YOUR characters?  What settings fascinate you the most?  How have your most thoroughly-composed characters influenced your plots?  Have they changed them at all?  Discuss, s'il vous plait!

9 comments:

  1. Fascinating, Brian! So much goes into the creation of a character; and you've brilliantly laid out the perfect platform for breathing life into heroes and villains! This is the first I've seen of your blog; so, I've back tracked and thoroughly enjoyed all of your previous posts! Your views on writing are insightful and instructive, pal! Almost inspires me to pick up a pen again; after quite some time. Not that you needed another, but, ya got a new follower in me, sir! Keep up the good words! :-)

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    1. Ben, my brother, it's great to see you here! DEFINITELY pick up that pen ... don't let ME get the last word (or else everyone's gonna be joining the Chris Pine Fan Club and subscribing to all the "Before Watchmen" books). ;) You should fire up that blog of yours again. :)

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    2. Oh, and thank you for the compliments! :)

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  2. Before Watchmen?!?!?!? YEAH RIGHT! Nice TRY, Brian! You and I KNOW DC would never be stupid, crass or unimaginative enough to do THAT! You almost HAD ME with that one, pal! BEFORE WATCHMEN! HA! THAT'LL BE THE DAY!!! You're such a CARD, my friend!!! ;-)

    In all seriousness, sir; the complements are richly deserved! You are and have always been an inspiration to me; and I am definitely getting my ducks in a row (in many areas) and indeed DO plan to start writing again.

    And when the rest of the world complains about me being such a crappy writer; I'll blame it all on you! :-)

    BEN

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    1. If you're like me -- and may Heaven help you if you are -- don't wait to get your ducks in a row because it'll never happen. Get those great ideas out in the open, bro!

      And when you do, you let me know, okay? Let's share an audience. :)

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  3. How do I create my characters? You've kind of covered a lot of the bases already, Brian. So here are a couple of things that expand on what you've got. I always ask myself a few questions about them.

    1. What lens do they look through when they see the world? Do they see everything in terms of their jobs? Their love life? Sports? Religion? Science? In other words, how do they interpret things?

    2. What are their worst nightmares? Seriously, what is the thing they fear the most? What do they dread? Then, I usually try to make that thing happen to them to see how they react.

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    1. VERY good ideas, Dan! And once you begin constructing your characters, do you fall in love with most of them enough to WANT to delve deeper into their pasts and the things that challenge them? I know it's that way, mostly with my villains, who I have been accused of liking more than my protagonists.

      Let me know when I can start plugging your book, wouldya? :)

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